section five in unit 2
I have
red [read] this article many times, but I feel more
bewilderment [bewildering]than before. I think the author’s view is self-contradiction.
He [She] can’t expound his opinion very clearly.
His some [Some of her] sentences are too absolute.
I understand them so hard [It is hard for me to understand them]. So I hate to read them. I think this article is fail. He thought many people who told other people their success and smart is showoff. But I don’t agree with his view.
May be [Maybe]they won success; they
wanted [want] to share happiness with their good friends. I think they don’t show off themselves. They just wanted to share their happiness with others. “And sometimes folks achieve great things and nonetheless do not show off about it”, I think this sentence
has [is] false.
With [In]author’s view, I think they showed off too. If they don’t show off their success, then other people will not know they achieve great things. May be they didn’t show off in direct, they maybe wrote some books or used other ways to show off them. Indeed, I think author didn’t understand showoff profound. I believe
they [those] who achieve great things weren’t showing off. They wanted to make some dedication for human. The quiet mother didn’t mention that she had been elected to the sate senate. The author thought she didn’t show off. I don’t think so.
May be [Maybe]she thought this success was beneath to show off. If she told you her success, I
don’t [won’t] think she was showing off. She just told us the fact.
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